Reviewer: Dido_Jolasun16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 4: SOMEBODY ELSE'S GUY: Brian

If Brian forces himself on Justin, ignoring his refusal, then that is rape. Portraying it as a romantic/sexual affair is troubling, to say the least.

Author's Response:

In case it wasn't clear...or you just aren't reading the scenes as intended, they are in the midst of an argument. I can't see that you are familiar with my work at all, if you think I wouldn't know or be able to distinguish between angry sex and rape. I find it troubling that of ALL the story, history AND plot given that you choose to negate an entire scene to nitpick and criticize (wrongly I might add) upon an innuendo which you have chosen to take, read and see completely out of context. Perhaps, before this gets out of hand, you should either keep an open mind or not read any more of my work because I choose to have character which act, think and feel like humans. They're gritty, dark at times and make decisions that are sometimes based on pure emotion and seldomly well thought out. Life is not all pretty prose and clean cut situations; it's not all rainbows and romance; neither is my work. So if that is what you are looking for, I don't mind telling you that it won't be found here. There are several excellent writers who indulge a reader's fancy and whimical musings or bow to the wishes of a single audience member as opposed to staying true to their craft and storyline. I'm certainly not one of them. I wish you continued pleasure on your reading journey.

Thanks for reading,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 4: SOMEBODY ELSE'S GUY: Brian

Ah, that feels so much better. LOL! TAG

Author's Response:

LOL! And so begins the seven-year itch...Well maybe? It might be longer!

More Soon!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: SOMEBODY ELSE'S GUY: Brian

"I fucking hate him right now but I love what he does to me" Perfect! God that was so hot! Again again, do it again! lol

Justin cried....oh God! 

Author's Response:

Shine, 

Trust me when I tell you, these two will be doing a whole lot of THAT again!! Brian is in this place where he may not be completely honest with others but he definitely is with himself. 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: Stacy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 9:40 am Title: Chapter 4: SOMEBODY ELSE'S GUY: Brian

I read a few chapters and I really like this story. I had to reread the first chapter, it's full of emotion. I understand that Brian didn't give Justin what he needed which was validation of the importance in Brian's life. They both of course had a major problem with communication. If Brian had given him that then Ethan probably wouldn't of happened. But Justin was also at fault. I didn't get about Justin saying that that the hardest part is freeing him and making him Happy? How did he think Brian wasn't happy. Justin is the one that cheated. He and Brian had only to talk to each other. Such a simple thing to avoid all of what happen. But of course that would be to easy. At least Brian knows that it was his fault to. That they could of avoided all this crap. That Justin said in the other chapter why Brian just didn't tell him that he wanted him to stay when he told him it was his choice to make, back at the loft. That 8s so true!

In the show Brian told Justin at Babylon when they made the rules  that the bat was the reason that he asked him to move in but that wasn't why he wanted him to stay, and Brian told Jennifer after the bat that he cares about Justin so why couldn't he tell Justin that he cares if he leaves, when Justin asked would you care if I wasn't here,when they were at the loft having that conversation. 

The other thing about the show, at the rage party when Brian told the girls to tell Justin I was looking for him. I never thought that Brian was setting him up so he could find him fucking Rage. That was Brian being Brian. I don't think that he was intentionally hurting Justin realizing that he would re:his bashing or trying to get him mad. There was no way that Brian could time when Justin would be talking to the girls and go to the back room to find him, Brian wasn't waiting for Justin to start fucking rage. He didn't send the girls looking for him. So I think that Brian was being his self and getting his needs met. Maybe Justin wasn't around when he looked for him and being that he was  drinking and  only thought of himself and not thinking about the bashing ect. He fucked rage. What do you think?

 Also the show When Brian took the mask off he showed hurt in his eyes and a slight smile he wore as to tell Justin that he cared. That was the moment that Brian knew that Justin has to make his choice then. Him letting Justin go was him not fighting for him or telling him if he's not happy that he can go. 

At least in your story Brian and Justin  knows what they should of done, and could of done so that wouldn't of happened. That they should of talked. And Justin knows that what's on the other side isn't always better, and what he had before with Brian was more. Brian knows the parts that his so called friends played. And that Brian andJustin knows they made a mistake. Justin is unhappy with Ethan and now that he wants to be away from him,time till himself ,I hope that he takes that as a realization that he should get rid of Him? To bad Vic and Jennifer doesn't help get these two back on track. Brian already admitted to him self that he made a mistake and that he wants Justin, that he is his so I hope he doesn't waste a lot of time. 

In chapter 4 where it says "And Justin never having the fucking balls to correct my knowledge, about him giving up on me, us,yes I can admit that there was an us, only to my  self, and he should of known" Does that mean that Brian feels that Justin should of told Brian that he wasn't giving up on them and that Brian thinks that he should of known that he cares and are in a relationship with out having Brian to  say it?

I loved that line "Maybe I can exorcise the demon of constant want and climb out the pit of  loneliness our fucking stupidity and silence threw us into. Fuck!" It sums it all up that they made stupid choices. Sorry for the rant, but I had things that should of been addressed in the show that I think that you might in the story. Lol I couldn't sleep and couldn't put your story down. Waiting for more.