Date: May 21, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Brian. Maybe they can somehow prove what Michael did and Justin can take Brian's mind of the whole thing.
Date: Apr 26, 2017 11:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Thank you fic gods! Brian knows the truth mostly, but I'm thinking there's a lot more he will uncover. Luckily, he's got Justin and his crew to distract him.
Bens situation is curious. He was to balking about Mikey, right? But his if he's never been to the Pitts?
Very nice using Time Bender as a analogy for Brian and Justin. We are only learning more of the facts, but I'm sure Time Benders villain/love has been revealed..
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, Mel finally told him about the GHB. But those filled condems have not only Brian worried but me too. Love the cooking Justin. However I see myself gaining weight just reading this.
Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
The dialogues are epic in this story!
I picked one, but it's not the only one I loved “Justin’s just working on his mating dance before checking out the goods.”
It's vaudeville-like, with people coming and going in others' houses. I guess it's the way really small towns work when everybody knows the neighbors, in a good way.
Happy and sad at the same time that Mel told Brian; at least, he knows.
Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Gran is hilarious!! I absolutely adore her! Justin is definitely making a great impression on everyone he comes in contact with. It was great to have a little backstory on why he gave up his lucrative career. I think he might go back to it, at least moderately, now that he has a face to put to the 'soulmate' character.
If the adage "The best way to a man's heart is through his stomach" is true, Justin is about to win a whole lot of hearts, especially Brian's! Cook On, Cutie!! LOL
As for Mel, I'm so happy that Brian trusts her enough that he knows she wouldn't harm him. I appreciated the sensitivity in which she delivered the news of Michael's betrayal. Now only if Lindsay will freaking fall in line...Michael's days within that group are numbered! Is it wrong for me to be happy as a pig in slop about that?
Although there isn't any bonafide proof, it's definitely easy to see him slipping a drug into Brian's drink to get what he's always wanted or to make everyone think he has. What better way to keep the tricks away from Brian than to have them all believing he's off the market with his best friend? I mean, nothing else was working for him- not the whining, the pleas, the tantrums, the suggestions- NOTHING! It isn't hard to stretch the imagination to how desperate Michael could and would get. I hope he doesn't follow Ted and Emmett to Sandcove!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 25, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think I'm seeing a parallel between the ending of time Bender as Justin is describing it and the end of QAF. Leaving it open to a possible continuation or leaving it in such a way that the view/or reader in this instance, can make their own ending. nice touch.
Glad Brian believed Mel. That he's going to be done with Michael. Looking forward to Michael's reaction and everything he's going to try to do. I hope he mistakenly admits to it. Brian is a hell of a wordsdman perhaps he can figure out a way. Someone is going to have to in order to get proof.
riley is makign friends with Brian. That's a good thing. hopefull he'll be able to lighten brian up a bit. Open the doors for justin.
Terrific chapter. I was looking forward to this.
Cheers,
Elaine