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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ Oh Baby…

Michael won't have to worry about doing simple chores at a halfway house cause he won't be getting out of jail for sometime,Justin Beat That Ass Good and if he does get out jail gen he will get beat again.

Stupid Moron broke Gus's arm because Gus is more mature than him and spoke the truth.

I hope that moment between Brian and Lindsay was recorded it could help with the court case to show how far she is willing to go to get what she wants.

Also makes me wonder if Brian is the first man who didn't want her that she suddenly became fixated on?

The Petersons won't care about this baby they couldn't pick out Gus in a photo line up of five kids, but if they help get Lindsay out of that hospital then they deserve the humiliation she will bring to their precious name and standing.

Lindsay isn't crazy she is just Greedy and Desperate to have the life she was promised by Mommy and Daddy, so what if Brian is gay if she can be bisexual than why can't he?

She refuses to see past her Wasp Dream of having everything she wants and like Michael she is going to learn that pissing off a Kinney and Taylor has some serious repercussions.I

Brian is going to love having a new baby in his life and so will Gus and Justin they will figure out a way to adjust and make all their dreams come true.

At least Deb is seeing that she can't cater to Michael anymore and it's okay to be a little selfish and preserve one's insanity by dropping the dead weight, it's time for Michael to be an Adult and face the Adult Consequences for his actions.

No more safety nets for Mikey and Linds.

Deb might beat Michael down when she finds out he broke Gus's arm.

love the kittens they are so cute!

 

 



Author's Response: You're so right Michael has done it again, he's his own worst enemy. To think a four year old can put him in his place. He's lost any chance he ever had for Brian's forgiveness. His dream of a future will now be limited to the inside of the penitentiary. Brian and Lindsay being recorded is a great idea. But in chapter 10, it's Justin and Lindsay that Daphne records for the court. You're right the Peterson's have no interest, in Gus and the new baby, they don't even want to acknowledge Lindsay as their daughter. Greedy, desperate, and delusional. Yep, Dr. Adler has it all summed up in her medical chart. Once Brian tells Justin about his visit with Lindsay, he'll no longer have to worry about Justin's reaction. Justin will always stand by Brian no matter what is thrown at them. Thanks for reading and commenting, I really do appreciate it. Chapter 9 will be posted later today. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ Oh Baby…

Michael is so stupid and mean!

So relieved that Debbie is not helping him.

Baby X is going to change many things in Brian's life. I hope the Petersons won't try to fight for custody.



Author's Response: If Michael keeps it up, he won't have any friends left to listen to all his whining... Debbie's seen the light, she likes her new Michael free life. Brian likes all the changes in his life, for the first time he feels like he belongs, and he's loved. All it took was a feisty blond with a big heart. No need to worry about the peterson's, they barely care about Lindsay, and the idea that her children are father by a homosexual repulses them... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ Oh Baby…

OMG, the kittens are so adorable.  Wonderful chapter.  Just when I think it is impossible to dislike Mikey and Linds anymore, you find a way.  Linds is just nuts, Mikey is evil.  Breaking Gus' arm is something he cannot ever be forgiven for.  Wouldn't it be fun to see these scenes in the series.  Brian with another baby is just fantastic.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response: Yes, Evil Kathleen's twisted mind never seems to run out of idea to inflict on dumb, and dumber... I'd be more than willing to write the script for a new and improved QAF. I'm just waiting for Cowlip's call... Yep, Brian's going to be a daddy again, and the truth is he looking forward to making a family with Justin. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2019 3:17 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

Your story is amazing.Aways looking  forward to reading more...especially now.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you'e enjoying it! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2019 2:33 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

Great update.  So many things going on.  Lindsay needs a lot of help- thinking she is pregnant with Brian's baby=- oh boy and then Melanie with her Anyuerism-  yikes. Brian needed to go home to semblance of order and that's a tall order with a young child.  Loving this story and I hope you update soon.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, the girls are both going to be in for a long hospital stay. Thankfully Brian now has Justin in his life. It may not be what they expected moving in together, but they're strong together. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2019 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

My, all the trouble Brian's friends manage to get into.  At least Justin will keep him calm.



Author's Response: Justin knows just how to take all Brian's stress away... Good thing Gus has his own room, ha, ha, ha... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2019 1:35 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

Great chapter.  I can't believe they kicked Michael out so he has to go to jail. Haha. 



Author's Response: So glad you enjoy it! Just wait until next chapter, Michael really can't help himself... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

If I were Brian, you couldn't pay me enough to see Lindsay's Dr. or even consider going to one of her sessions. Let her live in her land of delusion. She'll be save and sound behind locked doors.

Hope they add plenty of time to Michael's sentence. Not being back by head count is a big no no.

Love the way Cynthia always puts him in his place.

Sounds like a stoke for Mel or close to it. She won't be able to care for Dusty's three kids, let alone Gus. How quick will Ted be to pick up Brian's revelation as to his relationship with Justin?

Gus just loves his daddy. Yeah think daddy should try to plan something special for Gus' birthday.

Deb, hope it all works out and Michael never finds her. She or Brian better get all his "toys" out frtom the basement before Michael ever gets back there. Share the money between Brian and Deb. Michael's an idiot for saying anything at all.

Love this. Glad to see it updated.



Author's Response: Brian's seriously considering leaving Lindsay in her padded cell. Michael, Michael, Michael, he is just and idiot! Yes, Cynthia has his number, and she takes great pleasure making him whine and squirm. I kind of feel bad for torturing Mel, but then again... Once Ted thinks about it, I'm sure he'll tell Em, who will tell Deb, who we tell everyone on the Avenue... Thanks, so glad your loving my fic! Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

Lindsay needs to be locked in a deserted island where she can't hurt anyone and she can live out her delusions without hurting others.

Michael needs a crib of his own so he can't hurt anyone but himself in Lindsay's island of Misplaced Broken Toys.

I feel bad Melanie is I'll bubuyt I also think she deserves a spot on Lindsay's island too so she can live in her delusions that Brian is to blame for her problems.

Gus needs a stable environment that neither Melanie or Lindsay can provide because they are too caught up in their own drama to care about the pain they cause that little boy.

Lindsay spent money on baby stuff and just expects Brian to give in to get fantasy, not won't she be surprised when Brian tells her he is marrying Justin.

Lindsay's parents should really be attending to Lindsay's care since Mel is incapacitated this is not Brian's problem, neither is Mel's care but Brian has a better heart than either of them out together.

I hope Michael is late checking in.

Perhaps Justin should go with Brian  to see Lindsay?

Thanks for the Update:)



Author's Response: Hmmm, a desert island? Is there survivor for the obsessive, manipulative and delusional? If so I'll call ahead and make a reservation for three, ha, ha, ha... Now that Gus has to loving father's he's never going to feel frightened and scared again. I think will wait awhile before we tell Lindsay about Justin, or she might really go crazy. Brian already ahead of you, he sending Ron and Nancy to see Lindsay. Yep, boxes and boxes of baby stuff, but who's the father? More coming soon... Hug Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Doctor, Doctor!

WHEW!!! The CUCKOO TRAIN HAS LEFT THE BUILDING!!! Lindsay needs to be locked on the Ward permanently and kept constantly sedated since it's the ONLY way she'll ever have that fantasy. I really wonder whose baby she's carrying. I can't imagine that Brian would have left any samples after Gus' conception for her to get ahold of, or Melanie for that matter.

Michael is such a CHILD! OMG! I wanted to just deck him! Is it wrong of me to hope he doesn't make it to the jail on time and that they make him serve the full sentence all at once? I know, I know... EVIL CHELLE, BAD GIRL! But a gal can live in hope, right?

I don't know what I feel about Melanie right now. On one hand, I'm trying to be sympathetic. As a person with a chronic migraine condition, there is always the fear and worry that they will turn into something more, or that something is seriously wrong when I get them. However, her constant bitchiness and bitterness, makes it hard for me to NOT want to slap her into the next century! Justin handled her very well though, as did Brian. I'm hoping that although her collapse is indeed serious, that it will also be the wake up call and attitude adjustment that she needs.

Poor Brian! Having to deal with all these crazy asses and the march of a thousand boxes was just too damn much, even for me! Where did Lindsay get the money to be able to send all that crap, and to Kinnetik no less... Oh, but wait! Is that the real reason they couldn't make ends meet in Toronto? Does Melanie know? 

I am so completely engrossed in this story, as I am with your others, Kathleen! You are such a gifted storyteller!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Yes, who's baby could it be? You'll find out in the next chapter. (Which I actually have just finished, can you believe that!) Michael, this time he actually makes it back in time, but being Michael he's soon to fuck-up royally again. Well... I'm sorry to hear about your migraines, but Mel isn't in the clear by a long shot. Lindsay, has spent the last six months planning her future with Brian. That's how she put them in so much debt, maxing out all the credit cards. That's so sweet of you to say Nichelle, you're to kind to me... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

Gus is so funny and smart! Mel is going to have a bad wake-up call.

Deb is on the right path and she will finally take some time for herself.



Author's Response: Yes, Gus is adorable, and he's right where he belongs. Bad wake-up call is putting it mildly, I have plans for Mel... It's time that Debbie shook the weasel off her back, she deserves a life of her own... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

I believe Michael's and Lindsay's stays are going to be longer than 72 hours. Way longer. Mel is going to be busy once she's released. Looking for a new job and a place for her to live. Brian's got her over a barrel as far as custody of Gus goes. Good for him.

Deb finally giving up the house? About time. It will be good for her. 55+ living would be perfect. She can make some friends which I think she could desperately use.

Who didn't know Justin and Gus would it it off?  Love of food and Brian being the common thread.

Glad to see this back.



Author's Response: Psych ward or prison, either way they'll be off the streets. Mel is going to have a long journey back to normal, and she's in no position to care for Gus. Senior community for Debbie that's perfect, she have them all volunteering for PFLAG in no time. Justin and Gus are going to show Brian that being a family is a beautiful thing... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:35 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

II love this story

 Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 1:29 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

Thanks for the update. It was really funny. I hope Debbie stays strong . Its funny that they are all in the hospital. 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. I think Debbie's had enough, she's ready to start a new phase in her life. It is funny, but they're all sick in one way or another. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 1:06 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

Wow, great update.  Love the picture.  Oh, but I really love when Mikey & Linds are in big trouble.  And, finally Deb realizes that she needs a life.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response: Squeals! Thanks so much! I love adding the pics too. Thankfully Michael and Lindsay can't seem to stay out of trouble, they make for great story plots. Run Debbie, run... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 12:55 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

What a nice surprise, I love this series. 

Ethan is waking up 8 see. Ha!



Author's Response: Thank so much! Yes, Ethan is still lurking in the background... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 12:51 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

How sweet.  What's going to happen when Mel and Linds learn Deb is selling her house.  Or when Mel learns that Linds is telling people she's Mrs. Brian Kinney.  No matter, now that Gus is with his dad and getting a kitten, life is good.



Author's Response: Maybe Michael, Lindsay and Mel can all move into a group home together, ha, ha, ha... I'm pretty sure Mel is going to stroke out when she finds out Lindsay is now calling herself Mrs. Brian Kinney, and Brian might just strangle her. That was kind of tricking how Gus got Brian to agree to a kitten. But who could refuse such a sweet little boy? Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ Confession Is Good For The Soul

Amazing story  .....I always thought Lindsey and Michael were delusional best thing to happen to them is being locked up on a psych ward.



Author's Response: Oops! Sorry, I missed your review. Keeping them behind lock and key is now the mission. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

Soooo enjoyed this chapter, Kathleen. Lindsay and Michael have truly gone off the deep end! Mel is insane with jealousy. In thinking about her possible condition, is it possible that she may have a heart condition? Hmmm... yep, my mind went there for certain. 

As for Deb, it's good that she's beginning to think of herself, and realizing just how toxic Michael is to her peace of mind. Let him throw his tantrum; it still won't change anything. Is it too much to hope that while he's locked away, Brian and Ted buy the house, change the locks and Debbie moves into her condo without telling him? Yes, I know I'm evil, but we all know just how much I love Michael...LOL

 Can't wait until the next chapter!

HAPPY Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Crazy is always fun to write, Lindsay and Michael make it so easy. Hmmm... I'll have to think about what I should inflict on Mel. Being Evil Kathleen, I'm thinking that a heart condition is just to good for her... Debbie can always move and not tell Michael where's she's living. Of course I can think of all kinds of trouble Michael could get into trying to find her. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 12:04 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Good Son

Deb is being smart and finally seeing that she comes not Michael he is a grown man who needs to take care of himself for a change.

Brian is going for full custody and letting the Three Little Pigs fend for themselves too he is not going to continue to be the doormat while they get to have fun.

The Big Bad Wolf is ready to blow their houses down once and for all.

Gus needs a stable environment and he can't get that with his mothers so they are too selfish to think about anyone but themselves and until they are ready to face reality then he doesn't need them around.

I don't think 72 hours is long enough for Lindsay but then again neither would an eternity but it could be a nice start lol

Thanks for the Update :)



Author's Response: It's only taken Debbie thirty five years, but yes she's ready to kick Michael out of the nest. The Big Bad Wolf is laying down the law, it's time for the little piggy's to suck it up and fend for themselves. As for Lindsay, unfortunately, eternities aren't as long as they used to be (channeling my inner Justin). Who would have ever thought that Brian would provide the stable environment for Gus? But, it seems that Peter Pan might finally be growing up... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2019 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos

Love it



Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~ Hugs Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos

Oh For Crying Outloud! I was folding towels, and it just hit me that Lindsay told Michael, "I returned to Pittsburgh, so Brian and I could have another baby!”  Did the hospital check her blood work, or did Lindsay tell them she is, while her delusional mind's playing, 'Wishful Thinking'?

You better hurry with the next chapter, pretty please, to save my sanity!

Evil Kathleen has struck again!

Cathy



Author's Response: Hmmm... Is she, or isn't she pregnant? That is the question, and who could the father be??? I'm pretty sure Brian going to pray for wishful thinking... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos

I've had a recovery period of five minutes, so maybe I'm coherent enough to write a review. You sure write crazy well. (that's a compliment in the greatest form.) Michael and Lindsay have left me speechless, in the aftermath of what Brian walked into, in the hospital, and had to hear. I usually have to pick my jaw up off the floor in regards to certain sex scenes, which yours qualifies for, but I never expected to have to do it, in regards to reading about delusional, manical nutcases.

I reread CH 4 before I read this, and I'm happy I did. It didn't have me feeling any sympathy towards Mel's plight, at all. But, on the flip side, had me feeling all sorts of pain for Brian. To go from that glorious vacation in Italy, home to the madness he did, well, I'm very happy he has Justin, along with Ted, Emmett, Daphne, and Gus, to help keep him sane. I fervently pray, Brian lets all of them handle all of this on their own. He doesn't need their shit, or the stress in his life. He has Justin and Gus at home; just let him enjoy his life for now. I'm assuming he will take care of Debbie and her house, anyway. Maybe Brian needs to move Debbie into a nice one-bedroom apartment.

I'm assuming Brian got to either speak with Mel or her doctor. I hope he got to talk to Mel, in order to find out who's the father of Lindsay's baby, although I doubt Mel's aware of Lindsay being pregnant. Sounds like Lindsay's been dipping into the male pool again. When you can't work, one must play. Or, OMG! Did she still have some frozen samples of Brian's?  Oh Lord Have Mercy!  I long for that to NOT be the case.

Hopefully, since Michael found out it was Daphne that made him shit his pants, and now wants revenge, he won't get out of the loony bin after his 72 hour hold. I have visions of him in a white straitjacket. But in case he does get out, my plea, dear Kathleen, is whatever he plans for her, please let it backfire.

I have to admit I was a little confused during the talk at the diner, as most of the time, I couldn't tell who was speaking.

I want to compliment you on the pictures you post at the end of each chapter. You always manage to find one that totally fits with your last paragraph or two. So, this is me, saying thank-you.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=



Author's Response: Sorry Darling, I swear I thought I responded to all the comments from this chapter... Yes, this chapter was jammed packed with all kinds of crazy. It's hard to feel any sympathy for Mel, when most of her problems are self inflected. Brian's going to need another vacation after he gets through dealing with his dysfunctional family. After his stint in the psych ward and weekend jail reservation, Michael may just forget about Daphne, but if he doesn't I'm sure it will smack himself right back in the face. Sorry about the confusion with the dialog in the diner, I'll try and be clearer... So glad you like the pics! I just posting the next chapter... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 7:54 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos

Michael knowing what Daphne did is not good for her; he might make a bad decision.
The only good thing is that Gus and Justin are staying with Brian.

Debbie is going to demand Brian that he fixes the mess that happened and I don't see how he could refuse.



Author's Response: Vindictive Michael is sure to be on the warpath, once he figures out what to do. Debbie might want Brian to step back into his provider and protector role. But he's unlikely to be manipulated as easily as before. Brian can lock himself away in the loft with Gus and Justin, finally happy just being with his two boys. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2018 7:41 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Amongst the Chaos

Read both stories...in one sitting...more, more, more oh how I love it



Author's Response: Squeals! Thanks so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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