Date: Sep 02, 2021 12:16 pm Title: Part Three
???? very sweet
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2017 8:21 pm Title: Part Three
OK Made me cry so happy for Brian and Justin Loved the story Xmas
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 4:17 am Title: Part Three
I loved it. Great job getting Brian back on track.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I went back and forth on a Justin happy ending. Glad I did.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2017 3:42 am Title: Part Three
Yay! A happy ending. I love it.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 3:42 am Title: Part Three
What a wonderful ending to a fantastic Christmas story. Great writing. Happy Holidays to you.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you. Happy Holidays to you too.
Date: Dec 10, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Part Two
Poor Brian... what a miserable life. Not that he didn’t make it so himself, but still. Ant wait to see your conclusion. TAG
Date: Dec 10, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Part One
Even if the concept has been done before, you’re doing a great job with it. My heart went out to this poor sad Brian. Please let Justin still be alive in the end though... TAG
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 5:32 am Title: Part Two
You are breaking my heart Please let brian have Justin again don't let him be really dead or Ted
Date: Dec 07, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Part Two
Brian did think only of himself and his grief when Justin died didn't he. Poor Jennifer.
Happy for Em. Six children he'll be able to adopt. Blake will raise his and Ted's son as happily as he can. He'll always have a part of Ted with him. Michael, no great loss.
Now Gus, I'm surprised how Brian turned him away.
What a lonely painful life he chose to live for himself.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Part Two
Well that was very illuminating. I can't wait for the next visit and to find out what changes end up happening.
Date: Dec 07, 2017 5:05 pm Title: Part Two
WOW !!!! Going to use a whole box of Kleenex before this story ends. It is so good, but so sad.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2017 2:35 pm Title: Part One
It is sad to know that Justin died and caused Brian so much pain. Is there anything that can be done to fix things?
Date: Dec 06, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Part One
This is fantastic. I wascso engrossed I wanted to keep on reading. More please. Soon.
Young Brian and Clair. She was his ang there was no room for another boy in her life.
Joanie was going to leave Jack. What their lives would have been likebif she had.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 1:26 pm Title: Part One
Very good, but just too sad. Hope there is some happiness along the way to the end.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 12:41 pm Title: Part One
Hiya,
Normally I don't read WIP's but Dickens' Christmas carol happens to be one of my favorite books. So I HAD to read this one.
Girl, this is starting off really well. It's certainly packs a punch. Strong imaging and exquisitly written.
Ted gone and so are Justin and the rest. Chlling prospect.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
XOXO
MeMa