[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Made it to the 1/2 way point of what you have written. Wonderful idea for a story so different from the usual B & J stories. Fantastic writing as always. Off to start on chapter 11. Have a happy day. Oh, by the way, I despise Michael.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Plus, I think Hunter should get his wish... when I read that line, all I could think was: let the fun begin! And you did!
Michael, Michael... you let out that drama queen that's in your DNA. I'm so proud of Deb and her voicing what she knew about the venom that David spewed. I wonder if his employer will want to keep him on... David will see his friendship with the man means nothing, when the man chooses to protect his business, and lets David go. Is it too much for me to hope that when Michael gets out of the diner and tries to escape in his jeep... that they have either had the air let out... or that they are slashed? Did he lose his bladder... scared when the bears got up? All those videos going around... if youtube gets a hold of it... the world has seen it. How big is Thomas' following?
Mel thinks she might hold the cards... what happens if Debbie says she needs rent money from her? Will Mel try to sue for back support? Contrary to her knowledge though... David, therefore Michael, might not have a pot to piss in pretty soon.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 5:47 am Title: Chapter 10
*Micheal ran like his a** is On Fire.* Keep the moron running On. ITS ALL OUT IN Open Now. WonderFull !! ðŸ‘
After all these years (Qaf) Michel's petulant & jeolous behaviour towards Justin & telling Justin to disappear Still makes angry. Wish Brian could punched him More than once.
ThankYou for the update. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 2:04 am Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait to see how David takes it when he sees the video of Mikey ranting. Mel's going to get her's, I'm thinking.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 1:51 am Title: Chapter 10
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!! Michael's reaction was EVERYTHING I could have hoped for. And then Deb and the Diner's mercenary tactics in getting Michael to voice his venom in regards to his machinations, and finishing with the KICKER... that Deb tell Brian that David was a mistake. WHOO-HOO!!! I can't wait for all those posts the Gay Grapevine have going to reach David. Is it too much to hope that it's Thomas who gets the pleasure of spilling the beans?
Both David and Michael are already ruined in the court of public opinion... and now it's Mel's turn! I do believe bringing in Gabriel is an automatic WIN for Team Jenny. And with Ben and Hunter's testimony added to denote the vicious games she and Michael played with people's lives all in an effort to have control... well, let's just say that I don't feel the least bit sorry that Karma is coming for her pound of their financially broke asses!
**Waves hand in Glee** Goodbye CONTROL for all three of them; Goodbye CAREERS for David and Mel, Goodbye CASH COW for Michael and Mel, and finally GOODBYE COMICS! The reality of Michael's continued hobby is defintely NOT looking bright. David just might have to sell the shop with ALL its contents, just to continue to have a place to live. I wonder what little Mr. Perfect Hank will have to say about all this.
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!
WRITE ON, StarBaby
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 12:29 am Title: Chapter 10
It is scary that Mel is acting like Lindsay if she could get Brian to play by her rules and the sad thing is that in her quest to have complete control over everyone she set herself up to be controlled by David and is in the process of losing her family any what little respect her kids could ever have for her.
What else besides money has Mel so twisted around David's finger that she didn't once try to get him and Michael to pay more in child support?
Ben and Hunter are stepping up to help Gus and Jenny while also showing The Three Blind Mice that they are going to wish they hadn't started this battle with pebbles because boulders are heading to smash their glass houses.
Time to Follow The Money!
Wonder how David is going to react when he finds out Brian and Justin are getting married and Michael's blow up in the diner?
Also how is he and his benefactor going to feel when the money stops flowing into his practice and he is Blacklisted? (Five seconds before his benefactor is running to the door)
Seems Karma is hitting David, Michael, and Mel times three.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2019 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Still really loving this!
Ta
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2019 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ah ah ah, Michael's reaction posted on the social media should be funny to follow. I can't wait to read how David will manage what has been said in the diner.
I hope Hunter will hit hard and Ben will back him up. I hope Jenny and Ben will be able to meet soon.
If Mel thinks she won, she better remember what it's like to be in Debbie's circle: she won't have any liberty to manage Jenny's life nor her own life. If she has no possibility to work and no money, she will depend on the gang and they won't let her one second of peace of mind.