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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2019 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

Mel better get used to the fact that she is just like Rita Montgomery... She's using her child to support herself... put a roof over her head... have money to live and survive. It might not be prostitution, but Jenny is still a bargaining chip to have free money given to her. She won't have - not ONE person - as a character witness, unless she can dig up someone we aren't aware of. And as I said in an earlier review... just let her try and bring up Brian in court... she will lose big time. And her lawyer said as much, too.

My big question - and the one the lady lawyer should be asking - is how is Mel intending to pay for her services? Lawyers are big bucks. I highly doubt the money she received is going to be adequate after paying for an apartment and food, and any other essentials she needs. Does she even have car insurance? If not, what happens if she's involved in an accident?

Michael... it started out with Mel saying: but now he was responsible for Michael’s hospitalization. I thought for sure I had forgotten something, so I had to look back. Only to realize it was maybe the psych doctor's fees? But, now it sounds like he really WILL be hospitalized. I doubt he will see the light of day ever again .... oh dear, how sad... NOT! I'm sure Dr. Banes was there to get Michael to talk openly. And probably better qualified in that field. But, I'm wondering what might have actually happened that night.

Did Michael slip Brian something in the drink he passed to him, so that Brian wasn't aware of what he was doing... or was Brian so out of it, that Michael crawled into his bed naked, and said they had sex? Because if Brian can't remember the deed... he was either roofied, or it never happened.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2019 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 18

thanks for update

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2019 3:50 am Title: Chapter 18

Melanie doesn't see she's a lost cause.  I wonder who her lawyer was talking to.  Maybe she knows more than she let on.  Michael just proved he's crazy and should be locked away.  Enjoying every word.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2019 12:16 am Title: Chapter 18

Squeak 😱. and Michael shows his true self  

I don't read WIP. I don't. But I'm completely addicted. I've check for updates every day (sometimes twice a day 😉). As Justin would say, " More, more. Faster...faster." 😍 

Don't make me stalk you 🤷🏼‍♀️

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2019 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 18

For one brief second Me realized she is making a mistake by using Jenny to support herself then just like that she tossed it aside because being right and having power over everyone is more important.

Especially if it means she can finally beat Brian because despite what she knows and that lawyer says she sees this as a battle between her Brian so Damn the consequences and the collateral damage to Gus and Jenny.

Who would be a good character witness for Mel?

Didn't she burn bridges at her old law firm when she left before or after she was made partner and while out on maternity leave? (Thinking about the show storyline)

Michael sounds crazy but he is just a spoilt child who wants everything his way Deb catered to that while Vic tried to stop it, that excuse that he didn't have a Father is just that, because even though Vic wasn't there every day he did his best to guide Michael. (Makes me wonder if he was hurt every time Deb said that in front of him?)

Brian walked into that room knowing that he is Really Done with Michael and that Michael was someone he should've left in high school the second he graduated.

They had nothing in common in high school and the years since hasn't improved that observation Michael will always see his life as the damsel waiting for the hero to save him and cater to his tantrums, while Brian sees Justin as his equal and the one who saved him from a life of mediocrity as Michael's favorite toy.

Michael threatened Justin so hopefully that means he should be committed Forever or jailed Forever.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

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