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Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2022 9:56 am Title: Chapter 21

I hope you are well. 

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2020 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 21

I just reread this wonderful story. 

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2020 3:05 am Title: Chapter 21

Hey Star.  We are all worried about you cos no one has heard from you in 6 months.

Please reply to this, just so that I know you're still with us and healthy - bollox to stories!!!

Hope you're okay, bestest wishes, take care,

Deb L.

 

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2020 6:21 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter...more please

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 21

Someone brought up in one of the post about David not shelling out money for a kid that Mel isn't supporting anymore.

Once he finds out he stop the support payments and close the account without notifying Mel which is exactly what she deserves.

I guess Mommy and Daddy Marcus aren't shelling out any cash so what will she d without funds or a job?

Jenny living with Gus and Ian is the best thing she needs right now cause she needs stability which is something neither Michael or Mel could give when they are only focused on themselves.

Besides Jenny needs to see Lindsay even if they don't talk she needs to see for herself that Lindsay is getting better and it will take time to make amends.

Hope you are Safe?

Take Care of You and Yours!😀

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2020 3:02 am Title: Chapter 21

Hi Hun, hope you're okay and in good health at the mo.

Miss my fave author's updates.  Sos, very selfish of me at this time, with the covid 19 thing going on.  But, I miss you!!!

Hope you're okay.  Take care.

Deb L.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2020 1:39 am Title: Chapter 21

Wow! What a chapter! I'm not sure what game Mel thinks she's playing. The proceeding was a sham, in my estimation. If she TRULY loved her daughter, she wouldn't have denied her another parental figure to love her... in other words, she punished Jenny for Ben getting out of an abusive relationship. It seems like she was agreeing with Michael, solely to help her taunt Lindsay. Michael wouldn't have agreed to help he in that respect, if Mel would have continued to let Ben see Jenny. Then to throw out there that Ben resented the fact Michael could have a child because he couldn't due to his lifestyle and contracting HIV? Nothing said about his partner cheating.

And what kind of love did she project, by making Jenny stay with David and Michael? She didn't care about the abuse Jenny received at their hands, as long as she got that almighty check.

Now that she's lost... to me it seems... big deal... as long as she can keep the support money. Without the support money, what would Melanie do? No form of income... and I doubt she can practice law again. I so wish that Gus wouldn't allow her to continue to receive the money... she screwed up her life, make her get out and wait tables... make her see what it's like to earn minimum wage. By allowing her to keep the money, it's like saying, fine, you screwed up, here's some money, big deal. We will take care of you anyway. But, what is David going to say about paying support for a child she doesn't have physical custody of? They'll be back in court.

Jenny was no more than a meal ticket... if she was more, she wouldn't have treated her the way she did when Jenny started to defy Mel's thinking and parenting. NEEDING to control someone, doesn't constitute love. Jenny DEFIED her! That's not love... that's hate! And by her trying to say Gus' name was Marcus-Kinney, just another control issue... he's mine.

She still managed to get her jabs in there about Brian and Justin, too. Nope, the whole thing is a farce. Melanie needs to go own. She's used and abused people/children long enough.

But, the lowdown of Mel stating Jenny made all that stuff up, tells me that Mel REALLY needs help.

Long and short of it... I presume one of the main reasons Mel needs the money too, is to pay for her farce of a lawyer. WRONG on so many accounts! Her lawyer saying Mel was actively seeking employment but doesn't have documentation... she should have been made to tell where all she has applied, so that they could check with those agencies.

I felt like throwing my laptop while reading this... who knows? Maybe it would help some of the issues I'm having with it...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2019 3:47 am Title: Chapter 21

Thanks for the huge new chapter!

I hope you find some time to finish wicked games too in the future.

Still love everything you write!

Deb L

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2019 3:09 am Title: Chapter 21

Wow, great chapter.  Just knew that Mel was going to snap.  She is and always has been all about Mel.  Love Gus and Ian stepping up to take care of Jenny. Wonderful writing.  HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2019 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 21

Mel walked into that roo.knowing she wasn't going to get custody of Jenny back but she did want the support money which goes to show where her priorities lies.

Ian is right she turned the situation against herself to be rid of Jenny cause she is up to something and doesn't want to be tied to a burden right now which she sees Jenny as.

Whatever stupid plan she had I hope she realizes that she is now going to lose more than her support payments, her career is already in the toilet and she has no one left to blame for her problems.

Gus and Gabriel did a good job of establishing what Brian is like as a parent compared to Mel and her need to have total loyalty or else.

Also showed how good Justin and Ben are years later because they love without conditions and love their children no matter what.

I also wonder he Mel isn't going to take that money and disappear?

But she would never leave quietly without letting everyone who defied her know how she feels and payback to Brian and Justin for beating her in a competition they are not playing.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Happy Holidays!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2019 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 21

So Mel made it easier for Gus and Ian to win custody.  Her thinking is so warped, she doesn't realize that even if she gets back on her feet, Jenny won't go back to what she felt, which was being worthless.  Anyone could see that Melanie was only thinking of her wants and needs and not Jenny's.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2019 8:10 am Title: Chapter 21

I'm soo excited. I've been waiting for this.  Merry Christmas to me 🎄

thank you. ..., I'm off to read. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2019 8:06 am Title: Chapter 21

Whoa!!! Masterful chapter! The arguments were very detailed and it seems that Mel is cooking something else; as Ian, I don't think she blew up just like that, she is too controlled to act this way in such a critical meeting.

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2019 7:14 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter, StarBaby!

I really enjoyed this entire scene. Gus, Ian and Ben were so poised in the face of Carol's questions, and accurate about Melanie character and motivations. I'm so GLAD that Jenny will be staying with Gus and Ian! It's so obvious that between Melanie and Michael, they were continuing the systematic abuse that they began with Lindsay. Hopefully, Jenny will finally be able to restore her feelings of self-worth.

As for Melanie... yeah, I'm with Ian. I think Melanie really was playing a game with that explosion at the end. However, I can't and won't say that it wasn't enjoyable to the fullest. Am I wrong for wishing that she would just F-OFF to her parents' house in Florida for good? I mean, Gus and Ian are basically allowing her to still use Jenny as her mealticket even though she won't have physical custody of Jenny anymore, so is there really a reason for her to stay around any longer?

And what's going to happen when David finds that out? We already know that he feels he should no longer have to pay the child support out to Melanie since he's supposedly leaving Michael. So I wonder if there is any way he's going to be able to stop paying Melanie. Honestly, it would serve her right if he did! But at the same time, the fool needs to part with his money while not having Mel or Michael reap the benefits. Hmmm, quite the web of What-Ifs you've created here, Darling!

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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