Date: Feb 13, 2017 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
That Laura person could become dangerous. Not to Justin's job but to his mental health.
Date: Feb 04, 2017 3:08 am Title: Chapter 3
wow Michael is just delusional... he is the role model??? and now Linday is going to get in the middle of the mess? ugh
I know I've read this, but can't remember specifics, so it's great, like reading it again (mostly lol)
Date: Sep 21, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael and Lindsay working together???? That's a recipe for disaster lol
Author's Response:
Yes, they certainly can be 'idiot twins' when they get together
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2016 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Justin and Brian's relationship in this is so gorgeous, it's flirty and fun and hopefully will be heading towards something more soon. But if not, I love the flirty banter they have going on between them.
Laura, ha, I actually laughed when Murph put her in her place, and ew, she is fucking her father in law? Dirty skank.
Michael, oy, he really needs to let Brian go and live his life. But he wont. Needy fucker lol.
Author's Response:
Sally,
No matter what Brian and Justin will always be attracted to each other. The way they flirt is just a natural progression of that attraction.
Laura uses whatever she has to in order to get ahead.
To Michael's way of thinking Brian 'owes' him because he was able tocome to Michael's house to escape his own home life.
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael has Brian's life all planed out for him, as if he'd ever want to live the Stepford life. Michael was never quick on the uptake, and now he and Lindsay have joined forces...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Kathleen,
Michael and Lindsay may have teamed up but they have no idea what they will be facing.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 17, 2016 10:04 am Title: Chapter 3
I definitely see angst ahead, with Laura ferreting out information about Justin. I'm assuming she'll somehow learn of Craig's outright lies about Justin molesting Molly. I wonder if she's so slimy that she'd sleep with Craig to obatin information. Ugh, completely grossed myself out with that thought. Those two would definitely deserve each other.
And then there's whiny weasel Mikey, whom Lindsay all too readily helps. Something very creepy about how she's willing to help him stalk Brian. I wonder if those two will collude with Laura.
I figured I might as well enjoy this chapter in the middle of the night since Mikey apparently metamorphosed into a horsefly and has been buzzing madly about. The damned git won't hold still long enought for me to make him go SPLAT! LOL
Many thanks for this latest chapter, ladies! 😊
Author's Response:
Michael and Lindsay are definitely stalkerish. They seem to think they own Brian.
Some people just love to try and start trouble. Karma's a bitch.
More soon.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 17, 2016 3:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Why can't the boppsie twins mind their own fucking business? Brian has a right to have other interests.
Author's Response:
JP,
Those two live in their own fantasy world where Puppet Brian does as he is told and caters to their every whim.
They may not enjoy the changes that are coming, oh well, tough shit.
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2016 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Delusional Mikey . . . LOL! TAG
Author's Response:
Tag,
Some people only see what they want to see and weasel is definitely one of those people.
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
Date: Sep 16, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love them getting to know each other so slowly. Of course it is a boss/employer relationship right now, as it should be but when they start flirting with each other, which I'm sure will happen soon, it will be so sweet...as first, then wicked hot! lol
Michael & Lindsay...hmmmm what a nerve, she's going to follow him! So intrusive!
Can't wait for more chapters!
Author's Response:
They need to have something to do when their not having sex.
Lindsay and Michael feel that they should be in charge of Brian's life, Brian sees it differently.
More soon.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 16, 2016 7:01 am Title: Chapter 3
I love how you are building their relationship. Smoothly, but surely!
I love how Justin put Michael down after the buzzing.
I fear big trouble with Laura as she seems to be from the WASP small world from the Pitts. She might find out the reason Craig used to push Justin out. But, Brian knows and he won't let Laura get away with it if she comes to reveal the false information.
Michael will also be a pain in the ass once he knows who lives in the Brian's building.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
A slow build is always nice. They need to have something in common outside of the bedroom.
Putting Michael down is always fun and so damned easy.
Brian is protective of those who need it.
Michael will always find a way to be a pain.
More soon.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 16, 2016 6:12 am Title: Chapter 3
What i meant by the way of grown up relationship was that Brian being grown up and has different priorities as he gets older. He sees that being in a relationship means a lot more then hanging out with the idiot Michael. It doesn't mean that he doesn't want to have fun anymore but he wants somthing more because he is now feeling that somthing is missing in his life. The normal life progresdion, In the show they both at one point were not acting like an adult in their relationship. They weren't always honest with themselves or their partner especially in the begining but they were at least better then some of their other couple characters. They always had a problem with communication which was the base of the problems.
In this story besides the horrible way Justin's father treated him, And the abuse that we know how Brian's father treated him ,was there other abuse that will be in the story? You mentioned scarring, from that.
Author's Response:
Hello John,
All will be revealed in due time.
Thanks for sharing your point of view.
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 16, 2016 4:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Hey, Liking this story.Michael and Lindsay are there normal a-hole self. Craig and Laura I just want to give them a beat down, and I like the introduction of a new character Laura too.The friend and turning into more, relationship with Brian and Justin is great and the interaction between them is more grown up. Since Brian said that he was growing out of his old ways and needing somthing else, does that mean that he and Justin will have a grown up relationship this time? You said that this story is all most done so I hope that means we will be treated to frequent posts. Hopeful. Lol
Author's Response:
We are glad that you like this story!
Laura is like a cross between Michael and Lindsay and should make for an interesting villainess. Considering both Brian and Justin's lives prior to meeting (especially Justin's), they needed this type of friendship. Both have trust issues and those type of scars tend to run below the surface no matter how much one might think they are healed. As far as the relationship of Brian and Justin goes, they have always had an 'adult' relationship. Truthfully it was more adult than a lot of those that we had seen in canon. It was based on complete honesty with oneself and their partner (even if it was harsh, late or came with a hefty emotional pricetag; that happens in RL too), implicit trust and open communication (which is supposed to happen but rarely ever does even under the best circumstances). Mitigating circumstances caused their break-ups but they were still handled in an adult manner to a degree that another couple may not have displayed (ie. Mel and Lindsay). Just as different doesn't always mean better, a different type of relationship- be it open or poly- doesn't make it any less mature than monogamy. The people make the relationship, not the title or type. As long as the people within the relationship agree to the terms and are honest about their dealbreakers; are on one accord, it can flourish into something magnificient. Thanks for reading and reviewing, ~Lorie and Nichelle
Date: Sep 16, 2016 3:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael and Lindsey and that freaken Laura lol a part from that I love this fic
Author's Response:
We need something to keep it from being just sweet and fluffy.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 16, 2016 2:53 am Title: Chapter 3
That Laura bitch is going to be trouble. I hope Brian can head her off. And the Needy Duo are going to be pitas. Update soon please! :)
Author's Response:
Laura will definitely try her best.
Those two always are, and they have only started.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2016 2:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Great and interesting chapter. Laura seems to be Mikey in female form. Love the background you've worked up for why Mikey is acting the way he is. Now he's pulled Lindsay into his plot to get Brian's attention. Want to read more soon.
Author's Response:
Happy you are still enjoying this.
Laura thinks a lot of herself.
Lindsay and Michael will continue to be the selfish annoying 'friends' that they always are.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~