Date: Jan 02, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
It seems like Brian has finally grown up.
Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahhhh, I feel better now that the boys have at least talked...
I really hate Michael, Mel and Lindsay right now. Michael for being a jealous bitch, Mel for being a hateful, jealous shrew, and Lindsay for being weak and letting the others get away with it... some friend!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a BITTER, HATEFUL BITCH Mel is!! I really hope she gets what's coming to her in spades!
Lindsay is a GOLD-DIGGING TROLLOP! As long as you have the money to support her wants and needs, to hell with actually having morals and a backbone.
Michael is PATHETIC as usual! What a moron. He's probably lucky that he was clutching his daughter's hand so that Justin wouldn't lay him out for his ignorant and spiteful comments. But then again, Justin probably didn't think the mouthy little troll was worth the effort. I hope they find out that Michael erased the message from Justin off the machine and they all finally face some hard consequences for their actions and neglect.
I'm glad that Justin finally got the whole story and heard the truth underneath all the drama. No Brian wasn't right but Michael is thick as always and Brian's words would have fallen on selectively deaf ears. It's great that they are establishing some preliminary ground rules of trust and communication if they are going to give themselves a chance to be together.
Truly loving this!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah!!!! I'm so happy that they are getting back together. I hope they get the chance they originally deserved and can raise both boys together.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 3
I gather that Lindsey and Mel are in for a shit ton of trouble?
Keep on going Star!
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Justin going to Canada was the wake up he needed to face what...who he has been avoiding for twelve years, perhaps this time they can have a mature relationship without 'The Family' getting in the way. (Just need to talk to Daphne before she tries to cream Brian)
I am not surprised by Mel's reaction she never liked the fact that she came second to Brian in Lindsay's eyes, instead of being mature and talking about the situation with her partner she just made Brian the villain in her story and that turned her into a bitter, vindictive shrew.
While dismissing the fact that Gus plays a factor in this she is using him as nothing more than a possession, she doesn't love Gus the way a parent should makes her and Lindsay no better than Jack or Joan.
Lindsay wants someone to take care of her and she will stay with the devil himself if it means she gets her creature comforts.
The fact that Gus has been missing for a week has not cause them any concern makes me think that they are seriously hiding something which whiny Michael knows about and he is helping them??
Michael isn't even worth a paragraph of course it is only the third chapter as the story goes along I am sure I will have a few choice words for that Asshat.
In this fic I hope Mel, Lindsay and Michael pay for their stupidity :)
Date: Nov 05, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Got to love good old dependable Michael, always one to make a situation worse. How dumb can you be deleting a message without listening. Lindsay is just as stupid as always, and yep, I am hating Mel. Can't wait to see what will happen when they realize Gus is not where he is supposed to be.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:40 am Title: Chapter 3
That went really well. Melanie being a bitch. Lindsay being the caught in the middle one but wanting it all. Michael being delusional. And Justin finally listening to reason. Gus is loved he just doesn't know it. I wonder if something sneaky is going on in that brain of his.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Its keep getting interesting ....keep it up.