Date: May 28, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
A wedding. Yes!!!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Wonderful chapter!
Michael gets some "feedback" from his cellmate on his whining and the end is fabulous! The fact that they feel free to have fun in Babylon and the question Justin asked is so right.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Beautiful chapter.
~Lorie
Date: Feb 14, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Michael and Lindsey are off to jail...finally. Lindsey realizes that she has alot to think about. I was surpirsed her parents said what they did. like they may give her a chance once she's on teh outside again. Will be interesting to seen what decisions she makes. she may think she's in the clear since she assumes she has that money stashed away. Boy!! Can't wait to find out her reation when she gets out!! LOL!! wonder if she'' keep her nose clean or if her sense of superiority will rear it's ugly head once again.
Michael, well, maybe Hiram will be teh one person to teach him the lessons he needs to learn. He's a stubborn idiot, but there's only so many times a person can be slapped/hit before they start to curb their tongue.
Justin proposed!!!!!!!!! that was so sweet and brian didn't hesitate!!! So a wedding will be in the works sometime in teh near future. wondering what the reaction for the bitchy twins will be when they find out. I'm sure Michael will rant enough adn whine enough that he'll have be taught another lesson. hehehe.
wonderful chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
Looking forward to what comes next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks lovely! So glad you're still reading.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
The bad guys are all in jail. I think Lindsay will do okay, but once she gets out the money she thinks she has will be gone. Michael is asking for it. Perhaps he'll learn his lesson? Looks like Justin and Brian are getting married and Slick has a wonderful picture of her mother.
Author's Response:
Yes they are indeed. And no he hasn't! More prison tales to come. Snickers evilly....
Date: Feb 13, 2017 3:04 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Michael.needs more than just a slap.came from Hiram,it would be fun to watch if he pissed off everyone in prison,he could be a laughing stock and punching bag which he totally deserve after all he doesn't think he did something wrong at all..As for Lindsay,good for she she learn to be quite if she doesn't want to get some attention...But can't wait for them to know about Brian and Justin getting married..
Wow that was the sweetest proposal ever,effortlessly but romantic enough..
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 1:10 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*
Lindsay is going to be pissed when she finds out she has no money Mel on the other hand will enjoy her face going all red.
Hiram is just trying to teach Michael to face his delusions but Michael enjoys fantasy island too much, I just loved when he slapped Michael I giggled.
The best part was the ending it got me all teary-eyed because Brian is embracing the fact that love isn't a lie, it gives you the freedom to feel happy, safe, cherished, adored and at peace in one's own skin.
Brian found his happiness and now with Michael and Lindsay out of the picture he can breathe easier knowing that Justin will never break his heart but cherish it every second of every moment they have together. (Getting a bit teary-eyed just writing it lol :))
Michael is already acting up so I wonder how long before Lindsay's diva side comes out?? (She just locked her entitled princess in her room but sooner or later she is going to pick that lock and get out)
One of my favorite chapters :)
Author's Response:
Cried when typing the end. Glad you enjoyed it.
Nicole