[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2023 10:34 am Title: Epilogue
Just finished, sorry I stopped my reviews just had to keep reading ! I loved how well it was written. So much drama and fierce love .
Date: Feb 09, 2019 3:54 pm Title: Epilogue
Love it. wish you write more
Date: Jan 02, 2019 5:22 pm Title: Epilogue
Once a year I find myself drawn back to this superbly written story! Just finished reading Timeless for a third time and it is still my all time favorite story! In my book, it’s a Masterpiece!! The emotion is still palpable, the way the characters are written is so different, even knowing the outcome doesn’t make it any less enjoyable. What some readers may have missed is that this is a Brian story as seen through the eyes of the writer, it was her story to write and tell. Justin and the others were passengers on her story train, and after taking time to read most comments, to some degree I feel the criticism is why a sequel was never written. Sure we all need to have thick skin at times during our life but when you take time to put your heart and soul into something, I’m sure it can be discouraging. I do think it’s ok to voice opinions but if the story isn’t your cuppa, then don’t read. I apply that rule to each and every story I read, and I’ve read hundreds! Can
Date: Dec 22, 2018 5:26 am Title: Epilogue
I don’t know how to worship at your alter... to express my absolute enjoyment of this novel. It’s a fully complex mystery packed full of real life bigotry and love.
it always hurt that these promising characters where just left to die on the page of bad scripts. They had so much potential that was never even slightly developed. It’s almost like Cowlip hated them. But you saved them. Thank you for that.
Im going to have to go back and read it again. I tend to read to fast when i’m In love with my adventure. It always requires a second... even a third reading.
Thank you 🥰
Date: Jan 10, 2018 2:04 am Title: Epilogue
I have just finished reading Timeless for a second time, if there was any doubt before there isn’t now, it is my all-time favorite QAF story!! I found it so compelling that after reading it for the first time a few months ago, I was drawn right back in, a true testament to the depth of the writing skills of the author! Cynical stayed true to the original characters, give great insight into who Brian was beneath all of the layers of “what you see,” showed the vulnerability of Justin being so young and how his lack of life experiences colored how he saw things and how he reacted, introduced us to many new characters to love. The use of vivid descriptions to set a scene was pure creative genius, it was like being taken on a visual vacation and dropped right into the setting!! The way a mood, a feeling, love, anger was infused in the eyes of the character left no doubt as to what they were conveying! The author also has the ability, in the middle of angst laden chaos, to deliver one line zingers that took me from crying buckets to literally laughing out loud “You must be so proud…you fucked a Boy Scout.”
Oh, I want to retract my original statement that I wouldn’t want a sequel, who am I kidding…I would love one! I have since eaten crow (and humble pie) and would love nothing more then for this amazing adventure to continue. There are so many chapters that could be written; How our boys adjust to their lives together after all they have been through, does the house become a palace or a prison, how does the extended family deal with the new Brian, do they go back to their old ways of how they treated him, does Brian step back into being CEO at Kinnetik, what happens to Linz/Sharon, Hillard/Keller, Cynthia/Mathis, do they find happiness together, what happens to dear “sweet” Melanie, always want more Gus, would love a little(ok a lot) of McClaren/Liam hot togetherness, does McFed come back to try and stake a claim to Brian(without success)if so how would our little pitbull Justin handle it. I can only imagine!!
I know a lot of time, energy & research goes into writing an epic story like this, so if the itch ever strikes you to write a sequel, I hope you scratch it! I will forever be a faithful fan and reader!! Candy
Date: Oct 08, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Epilogue
I llove the story. Will there be a sequel?
lah
Date: May 17, 2017 10:41 pm Title: Epilogue
This was just amazing! I found it by compete accident and you had me hooked from the start. I couldn't stop reading it. I love the way you write and I happily await your next one.
I love Ted and hated that he was such an asshole in this story but I could understand why and totally see it happening. Great job! Bravo! More please....
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 5:29 am Title: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this story, even better this 2nd time around. Very moving.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Epilogue
The fact that Justin never notice is disquieting. The fact that he finally gets what Brian has been trying not to tell him with Cedric's help is amazing. That Ted had the nerve to come back and say what he did makes me angry. Plus we never learn what became of Melanie. This story is action packed and emotionally draining and one of the best fics and there are many that I've read.